Friday, March 1, 2013

Otoor's Read/February

Title: AVA / SUNSET FAIRY
Author: Meadow, Daisy
Otoor’s Read
Kristy and Rachel with their parents were spending a week summer break at camp stargaze, the two girls were so happy going together because they were best friends
They went on ferry, the river was surrounded by open fled every thing was so beautiful the tree, the sky, and the sun was setting. The two girls had visited fairyland many times and helped their magical friends whenever they were in trouble. The fairies biggest enemy was mean grumpy ‘Jack Frost in fairyland and human world.
Suddenly the blue sky’ turned to green so as everything was changed.
After the ferry reached camp stargaze, they saw large tents also a lot of picnic table scattered all around also white building was the observatory with telescope inside.
Ava the sunset fairy saw the girls , after spoke with them about fairyland , lifted her wand surrounded the girls with a cloud of magic fairy dust ,the  girls closed their eyes felt them self through the air then opened their eyes they were  standing in fairyland were king Oberon , Queen Tatiana and six  other fairies they all welcomed the girls.
The queen explained, every thing that happened between dusk and dawn goes smoothly in both fairyland and human world, but Jack Frost, and his goblins had ruined the night time. The girls noticed that each fairies was holding small satin bag, seven different color
Then, Ava , explained ,while we were going to a party under the stars last night with all our fairy , Jack Frost and crowd of goblins through the open window they stole the satin bag and Jack Frost said , with the night fairies magic I could cause night time chaos, Ava asked the girls if they could her getting bag of sunbeam dust, the girls, agreed.
Then, with magic fairy dust after few second later they returned back at camp stargaze.
Everything was still covered in the same green glow and sun remained high in the sky,
While the girls were taking their food they noticed two boys wobbled over to the picnic table they looked green and had different noses and feet. , Goblins, said Kristy, and then the girls heard them spoke about the bag that one of them had lost.
Ava and the girls decided to look for it.
Peter, was one of the counselors ,made small game with the boys in the wood  first the girls combined   then went aside looking for the bag with Ava ,  on the roots of the tree was a sparkling  satin bag  Rachel gasped  ‘I found it ‘ while she wanted to pick it  up, The goblins ha came. The girls showered with fairy dust immediately they shrank down to Ava size using their glittering fairy wings to hide behind the tree branch around the tree
Suddenly goblin spotted the bag of sunbeam dust and gave a shout of joy.  Kristy said "We could distract them with other bag”.  Ava agreed and flicked her wand, cloud of magical sparkles different onto path in front of the goblins appeared.  The goblins said this bag that Jack Frost wanted they took it and left .Ava hugged her bag and also hugged
The girls happily and returned back at camp stargaze with a wave of her magic bag the green sunset slowly began to fade soft shades of panic orange and gold began to appear until the whole sky was filled with beautiful color .
Exciting things always seemed too happened when the two girls got together because they liked magic and adventures.

Librarian's Comment:
     This is Otoor's second book of the month. It's amazing how detailed she is to describe what's happened in the book. Great job, Otoor!! Go on reading, writing, and sharing.

Mei-Wan

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